Poems

Today was a very strange day for me. You know, till now, I have had less than more inspiration (or maybe it was just doubt) to try to write a few lines of words in English. I knew, in the early morning, school would be boring this day and my mind thought about everything but school stuff. And suddenly I got a first thought in English words. Then I realized I were trying to rhyme those words. That was real surprise for me. I got to school and wrote those words to paper and then laptop. Lucky me, because I had this practical thing with me at school.
So this is the final result. I´m not sure ... maybe I did a few mistakes, but ... at least I can declare that this is really my first try.

Remembrances

Everytime I hear your voice,
every whisper, every noise,
heart is braver, soul is strong
and I can lightly carry on.

But that was the day before,
now, I feel lost more and more.
You are dead and I do not know,
should I cry or there´s a hope?

I see shadows full of lust,
they think I will break.
I just have to bury past,
my revenge will be made.



Six feet under

Six feet under there is the darkness,
six feet under light means poor madness,
six feet under you cannot move,
six feet under cold as a proof.

Six feet under you are lying,
six feet under and no crying,
six feet under hear the beast,
six feet under without peace.

Six feet under ringing the bells,
six feet under breaking all hells,
six feet under feel your breath,
six feet under no more death.

oh, Samabel that´s really beautiful first try!! i like it very much... and this rhymes really great
the first poem is so emotional and sad (but still amazing). And my voice trembled, while I was reading it... and the second one is beautiful too. It´s so "six feet under"... I don´t know. So dark...I´m fascinated. I just have no words. admirable

(sorry for the grammar )

I told you should try it! I knew it would be great and I wasn´t wrong. This was just perfect I love it!!! It was really very well written and I am glad you decided to share it with us. It sounds incredibly good. The fist one is awesome. So sad but still with the hope, just wow and the second I loved the way you repeated the same words in the beginning!!! well, you did a great job and I can´t wait for your next poems or stories or whatever your inspiration brings to you!

Thank you very much for your beautiful comments.
Six feet under - here my inspiration was Dean words form 4x01 and the first poem it was created without thinking... it just happened.
I´m glad that I could make something new, because last week I had no time to continue with my short story "All I have is fear"
Thanks again.

So, it´s been a while and I have one more poem for you. I´ve tried to be very careful about choosing words, because I have this special idea about the meaning of poem. I hope I did it better than worse. Here it is ... thanks for reading and enjoy it.
(Sorry again for some grammatical mistakes, be patient with me, please )

For love

The path of life leads you
you are walking without fear
but to do what you really want to
is like a fight with seas of tears.

Cannot confess to anyone
nobody will understand.
You have this invisible brand
what hides you from the sun.

To find what has been lost
is the mission without end.
Sweat and blood it cost
fire rains from your hands.

The victory is far away
where the hidden river flows.
Is right one of these or those?
Who knows? You are forced to pray.

To run without wasting
without a chance give up.
For what keeps you breathing
for love.

holy s... that´s beautiful! totally amazing... I love it! it was sooo emotianal and sensual images were great! good job!

Thank you for your words.
I found one bigger mistake but the word is now correct.
i have to confess, that this poem is one of my favourite. I don´t know why, but it´s like I have better feeling about all of this.
So I am really happy you like it.

Samabel I´m really amazed and impressed by your poems. Great job. Keep on writing ... cause you´re great at it I also write in english, but I haven´t written a poem which would be so meaningful and would also have rhymes .... Well done