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I am very sorry that it took me so long for posting next part I really didn't have an inspiration. In this part won't be the boys again... sorry however, I have a good news too. After this part you will be sure, that there is no way for Emma to be love interest for our boys It's also not very long part, part I really hope, that now I will be able to update more often. okey enough my boring bla bla bla. here is it! enjoy

“Emma, you mean a lot to me and I would do anything for you but there is just no way I am making a deal with you.”
“I am not asking for your permission, Nicolas.” I stared at him and he knew he lost.
“You are doing a huge mistake, you know that, right?” still didn’t want to give up. Oh men…
“I am doing what is necessary.”
“You gonna die!”
“Nicolas stop! I am not discussing this with you. I gave you a choice to do something but you said you can’t. You said you can’t! So there is no one else, just me….”
“But you gonna die!”
“So what? When my parents died because they refused tell demons about your secrets, that was ok? Or when my brother died protecting the gate of Heaven, that was ok too but when I want to die for someone who deserve it, it’s suddenly not ok? Why? Because I am not dying for you?”
“No! That’s not he reason. Look, I am truly sorry for your lost but you can’t sacrifice yourself! That’s not right! It’s just not!”
“Nicolas! I’ve already decided what I am going to do and you can’t change it. If you won’t make deal then I will find someone else. Is that what you really want? Do you want me to go to the crossroad’s demon?”
“No! God no… I just… I can’t… Look, I will try to help him, okey? Just don’t do anything stupid.”
“What? You can get into lot of trouble.”
“I know, I know…”
“Then why? Why are you doing it by yourself? Why are you risking everything?”
“Isn’t that obvious?”
“Well, no. If it was, would I ask?”
“I love you, Emma! I love you and I can’t watch you die… I can’t.”
Then he quickly turned away and disappear in the white light. I was shocked. I’ve never thought he would… I was frozen. I didn’t know what to do. I just stood there totally out of my mind until the church’s bells started to ring. Then I slowly walked back to the Missouri’s. One single tear felt down on my face. I wiped it away with my sleeve and whisper:
“I love you too, Nicolas…”

oh my fucking god...I'M sorry for this words, but this.... this is the firt time I'm crying for someone else then our brother.... I swear, this words just made me cry:

citácia :

“Then why? Why are you doing it by yourself? Why are you risking everything?”
“Isn’t that obvious?”
“Well, no. If it was, would I ask?”
“I love you, Emma! I love you and I can’t watch you die… I can’t.”
Then he quickly turned away and disappear in the white light. I was shocked. I’ve never thought he would… I was frozen. I didn’t know what to do. I just stood there totally out of my mind until the church’s bells started to ring.

Dionka you are so great, I can'T tell you how much I appreciate, that you write THIS story about angels and..whatever... hej everytime, when I read next part, I look at the monitor and I'm frozen, my mouth is open and...I don't know what else.. it's just unbelievable..I have no idea if this is because this story is in english, but...it doesn't matter, cuz I love it and I don't care about anything else....

thank you

by the way: nest part right now

PS: Sisel: hey if your words were for me too, so I want to thank you...

SNlois: gee your comment is again breathtaking... for these words. i am very happy that you like this story so much. i will try to do my best and update soon. btw you are a really sensitive reader i also want to say that you don't have to thank me everytime, i am doing this is for you because i want to, because i like writing in English, so it's my pleasure. but again. thank you thank you thank you for such as wonderful words this is what gives me inspiration so again thanks a lot

you love me just for my words?? ouuu unexpectedly maybe I'M starting to be angry just kidding

Me and sensitive?? well what can I say.... that's just me and I know that I don't have to thank you everytime but, what else can I say, then thank you. Tell me of course I can tell you..ehm for example: biscuit
But you know, it sound so...well it's sound just like me and man I can't do that on public so just tell me what should I write.
yeah and by the way, you don't have to thank me everytime too

oh god I can't breathe. SNlois you are unbelievable in English too biscuit! gee i can't think clearly right now and I can't do that on public i think you are already doing it on public

but okey, what you should write, ehm i don't know. just say what do you think about the story, what was your feelings about that part and so on... i honestly have no idea and you can say thanks in the end but for me it's kind of strange when i read thank you so many times from you when i am actually doing it because i like it... but it's really sweet, so don't listen to me and just write whatever you want, because it is always wonderful and make me feel like I can fly...

and of course i don't love you just or your words. you are an amazing person and i am very glad that I can call you my friend, even in same way my family so i love you for what you are but after commenst like that i love you even more

and next time i will try not to thank you so much, too. However, i can't promise that it will work, because everything what i can say after reading your comments it's just thank you....

oukey dokey...that's just hey I tell you on thing..no one, man or girl or animals, no one tell mi I love you so many times but whateever...
I'M seriously, and of course I'm proud that i can call you my friend too and I'm in heaven and I can't write more words...

but well, the next time, I will write you something new...something special

Thank you much for thid wonderful part! It´s very nice and little bit sad You write in english amazing!
Emma is nice person, when she would like to help Dean from his deal so much!!
Please next part soon, i don´t like waiting for long time

hey buddy i need the next part i need write something special forr you and I need write something new in english and i need think about this story and of course i need read the next part too...i ned more dean, Sam angels and whatever.....
so, well....you see.... i need it

hmm okey i will try to write something, but today i am really busy with school. but maybe just few sentences? i will see, but i can't promise anything...

donŤ worry i can wait....really...you don't have to write something if you don't have idea or lust or...well you know what i mean

alright, we are slowly getting to the end. let me repeat once again SLOWLY getting to the end...

well i know that i said i am not gonna torture dean but heck i am who i am so it will be a little bit of torturing (maybe not just a little) in this part and also you will be probably a little schocked about what will happen with nicolas (again maybe not just a little) i am sorry, please don't kill me.

Immediately when I arrived back I noticed something is wrong. Very wrong. Missouri and Sam were in the living room standing next to Dean. He was sitting on the sofa, his face pale and his hands were shaking. When I entered the room they all looked at me and they were mad. Very mad.
“What have you done?”
“Nothing….” They were getting angrier. But what could I say? I didn’t know what was happening either. He shouldn’t be in pain. Then I saw him. Nicolas. He was standing in the corner of the room. It seemed like nobody else noticed him, just me.
“Nicolas?” I asked, worry hearable in my voice. All of them turned their heads with my voice. Dean groaned from the movement. Nicolas looked at me and it was something in his eyes what I didn’t recognize.
“Ow hi Emma. Already back? I thought it will take you longer get through the words ‘I love you’ but as I can see I was wrong.”
“Nicolas what’s wrong? Why he is in pain? Couldn’t you help him?”
“Help him?” He laughed.
“I didn’t even try.”
“What?” I didn’t understand.
“Emma, honey, this was never about helping Dean. This was my test and I passed thanks to you.”
“Test? Nicolas what test?”
“You will see very soon. Oh and by the way I don’t love you. I’ve never had.” Tears started running down my face.
“Why are you doing this?”
“Why?” He asked surprised.
“You said that by yourself once or twice. Demons are not following the rules why should we? But they didn’t let us help. They didn’t let us do something and well, you were right. I think we should do something, too.”
“I didn’t mean this.” Shit, shit, shit. This wasn’t good. This wasn’t good at all.
“Heh I don’t care. Can’t you see it? This is my chance. I am not gonna waste it.”
“Nicolas please… don’t…”
“Too late.” I couldn’t believe my eyes. My teacher, my protector, my savior, my love…was turning evil. He screamed in pain when his white wings started to burn. He dropped to his knees and then the new pair of the wings showed up. They were black like his new eyes. He wasn’t a god’s angel anymore. He wasn’t my Nicolas anymore. He was a stranger, an evil…. The fallen angel…

today i finished this story so here is the last part

I was shocked for the minute but then the sudden groans form Dean literally woke me. I looked at him. He was in a really bad pain. His eyes were shut and he was trying to control himself from screaming. I didn’t want to hurt Nicolas but I realized that Nicolas is actually dead. I knew what I had to do. I closed my eyes for a sec and counted to three. My family members were guardians of the heaven’s gate for the centuries. I became one just few months ago. But I already knew how to use my powers. The radio in the kitchen started to play a song, which perfectly fit to my situation. Nicolas stood up in front of me with the sick smile on his face. He wanted a war. Well, I will give him one.

Sparkling angel I believe
You were my savior in my time of need.
Blinded by faith I couldn't hear
All the whispers, the warnings so clear.
I see the angels,
I'll lead them to your door.
There's no escape now,
No mercy no more.
No remorse cause I still remember.

He jumped on me but I got out of his way. Then I took my knife and stabbed him.

The smile when you tore me apart.
You took my heart,
Deceived me right from the start.
You showed me dreams,
I wished they'd turn into real.
You broke a promise and made me realize.
It was all just a lie.

He started to bleed and he was shocked. He didn’t know that I became the guardian. He didn’t know that the knife which can kill almost everything exist and that I have it. I am just full of suprises.

The smile when you tore me apart
You took my heart,
Deceived me right from the start.
You showed me dreams,
I wished they'd turn into real.
You broke a promise and made me realize.
It was all just a lie.
Could have been forever.
Now we have reached the end.

He slowly died before me and I could just cry. I loved him so much… Immediately when Nicolas dropped to the floor dead, Dean started to feel better. All of them were looking on me, unknowing what to say, what to do…

This world may have failed you,
It doesn't give the reason why.
You could have chosen a different path in life.

They couldn’t do anything. My life was full of so much pain… I wasn’t sure how much I can take. Then Dean came to me, put his hand on my shoulder and tell me
“Thank you…”
I felt him next to me, I felt the connection and he reminded me that it could be still worse. They’ve been through a much more than me. So I said to him.
“Your welcome.”
Then we all quietly left the room. The boys left next morning and promised to call. I stayed with Missouri and started work on my own cases. In the end of that week the other angel came to me. The Gabriel. I didn’t want to talk to him at the start but then he promised me to help Dean Winchester and asked me for a help in the war between angels and demons. The big surprise was that angels decided to start the war, not demons. I agreed and smiled. Dean was saved and I finally had peace of mind. I was really looking forward this war. It will be huge, but we will win. We will win because we always do. The good guys just can’t lose.

the end

So, I´ve finally read your four last chapters. I think they were four and I can´t find that kind of special words I´d like to tell you, right now.
It was amazing, a very good idea and I´m glad you did not forget our favourite torturing Dean . But I think I´m also glad that you didn´t take it too far and it was just like - one small torturing thing
Emma - poor person, but she was very brave and maybe a little wild what I appreciate.

So I hope that you gonna write another great story in English. I´m looking forward very much and I wish you a lot of inspiration.

thank you very much I couldn't help myself and I had to use torturing a little bit well right now I'm gonna take a little break from english stories but I do have an idea about one fic and I think that I will write in English so I will be back with something new- that's for sure and again thanks for very kind words, I am very happy that you like it

Don´t mention it.
Ok, I think that take a break can be really good thing, especially when you will be back with a new story then.
So rest, rest and rest with your English stories and meanwhile I try to be patient.

thanks meanwhile you can still enjoy my slovak stories next fic will be probably about death but I am not 100% sure... I want to finish some things and when I will be done, I will start with new one

vuhooháááááhohu huuu hoohoo heyy aahhhhh uheee juhee haaahh

That was the new word I promised to you okey, it was well, just some words from me, what did you expect.....
BUT, the word means, that I unbelievable LOVE your Story....and this 2 last part....man, I'M crying like a Smartass It was soooooooo heartbreaking it was wonderfull, amazing, special, unexpectedly, sad, fabulous and..........see????? I can't find the words It was mAXI KING (well, not that yummy candy snack) don't worry it doesn't mean, that it wasn't graet, cause it was GREAT
I love you, I love your story and now...I love the girl....I was so sad her love came to a bad side and SHE HAD TO KIIL HIM oh my fucking good....that was truly heartbreaking

And torturing Dean..hey I loved it here it was enough gently...

and hej YOUR TEXT in the end part...well it was wonderfull you are an other shakespeare, aren't you??


SO just hem...you know your my king (not on public)

oh my god that was really very nice comment SNlois, thank you so much The text in the last part was from the song Angels by Within Temptation and I hope you like it I know that it was kind of sad but I really liked that idea about fallen angels

the beginning of your comment was really amazing You can always make me laugh out loud you know, I love you for that
and well I really don't think that I am another Shakespeare 'cause firl I am MISSIS KRIPKE (don't tell me that you forget )

torturing Dean- well it wasn't suppose to be there at all so I decided to be a very gente (this time )
and I am your king? well that's really nice but I would prefer to be your queen

so again thanks a lot for your beatiful words it means a lot to me

oukey..sooo
MISSIS KRipke (ehm I really didn't forget) but I will remember that...promise

and sure you can be the Queen of my

so well,
your welcome and now I'm running download the song...

heh great if you want that song I hhave it it's really great


and OMG i am the queen heh and of course you will remember that I am Missis Kripke 'cause if you won't I will be very bad girl (just kidding- I think )

Wow, there is two part, I didn´t know it... i looked over next to the last part i don´t belive it! Fortunately, i see last one part!
It was really great and interesting.... Nicolas became badguy, when i read this part a see like that Emma was very brave woman, i like it! And the final fight was perfect! She was winner and he died. It was sad little bit... Torturing Dean it couldn´t miss And the end was nice, the angels will go to war with demon!
It is amazing story! I love it! You write absolutely amazing and nice!
I am enjoying to your new strories!!

jeeeeeej thanks madlen, i am very glad you like it it's not a very long story but it's my longest in English so I am kind of glad that is already over... I have so many new ideas about my next fics that i Don't even now which one to start write I am gonna take break and think a little bit about it and I guess that very soon It will be next story here

And did you choose your topic for your next story? Or you´re hesitating? I´m so glad for your English stories.

well i am not sure yet but maybe something with death or dreams and of course our brothers I would say that for now I am hesitating so if someone has a request I am open to your ideas

I don´t have a special request. I´m just curious. Well, I´m glad that you have some plans with our adorable brothers .